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  2021年7月10雅思大作文題目

  The education of young people is highly prioritised in many countries. However, educating adults who cannot write or read is more important and governments should spend more money on this. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

  范文及解析

  Introduction

  Traditionally, education of young children is always given the top priority in the majority of nations, but prioritising the instruction for illiterate adults is highly recommended by some educationalists. Personally, I fully advocate such recommendation and deem that the corridors of power should allocate more budgets to this.

  【解析】教育類話題，需對接受教育的群體進(jìn)行討論。注意題干中的more important，說明具體論述時，是否該給成年人掃盲需要與未成年人教育進(jìn)行對比。站邊同意。

  illiterate adj. 不會讀寫的，文盲的

  corridors of power n. 權(quán)利走廊(= government)

  Body 1

  Admittedly, it is justifiable for some to refute such proposal for the reason that some adults, especially the elderly or those who are engaged in repeated low-skilled work, seem to earn their daily sustenance based on abundant experience without barriers, even though they are unable to read or write. Besides, in comparison with young children, who are at their best stage to assimilate new techniques and thus can be easily nurtured into elites in sundry domains, adults are more likely to be inhibited by self-consciousness, consequently incurring the low learning efficiency. However, the aforementioned argument holds no water, which indicates that behind education of adults are more gains.

  【解析】讓步：理由1：一些老人或者從事重復(fù)性工作低技術(shù)的人是否識字不影響其生活;理由2：小孩更有可塑性，與其相比，成年人已經(jīng)錯過最佳學(xué)習(xí)時期，可能導(dǎo)致學(xué)習(xí)效果與投入不成正比。

  refute vt. 駁斥

  assimilate vt. 吸收

  elite n. 精英

  hold no water 站不住腳

  Body 2

  The apparent argument in its favour is that such policy can definitely bring convenience to those undereducated people in their daily life. To illustrate, there are either instances where the senior easily get lost in the elaborate network of metros since they fail to understand the instructions or cases where people showing ignorance of dosage and warnings misuse the medication, thus spawning tragedies. Hence, wiping out illiteracy for adults should be prioritised. // Additionally, if illiterate adults seize such chance to acquire new working techniques, especially when robots are gradually replacing them to do those repeated work, they will secure a more decent job, and the whole society can thus enjoy a more vigorous workforce.

  【解析】從生活和工作兩方面進(jìn)行好處的闡述

  undereducated adj. 未受良好教育的

  elaborate adj. 復(fù)雜的

  ignorance n. 無知

  spawn vt. 釀成(貶義)

  wipe out illiteracy 掃除文盲

  secure vt. 獲得

  Conclusion

  To recapitulate, eradicatingilliteracy facilitates the nation to increase economic diversification and optimise industrial structure. Therefore, authorities should invest funds in the education of non-literate adults.

  【解析】重申觀點(diǎn)

  recapitulate v. 總結(jié)

  eradicate illiteracy 掃除文盲

  optimise vt. 優(yōu)化

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