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  The table gives information about patient satisfaction in three different hospitals towards four aspects，namely， hospital staff， waiting time， treating and service aftercare.【對題目的 patient saying …. good 進(jìn)行改述，避免重復(fù)，也同時避免累贅】

  Overall, the patients surveyed were most satisfied with services provided by Hospital C,as opposed to HospitalA， who received the least praise 【對題目的改述】.【總覽段的內(nèi)容不建議出現(xiàn)具體數(shù)值;根據(jù)靜態(tài)圖的寫法，選擇數(shù)值最多和最少的兩項進(jìn)行概括即可】

  Out of the four aspects,all these three hospitals had a good performance in treating and service aftercare 【分段依據(jù)∶將表格中相似的數(shù)據(jù)歸在一段描述】.In particular【和上一句構(gòu)成總分結(jié)構(gòu)】，HospitalA received the highest satisfaction ratings,at85% and 83% respectively, only 1% higher than Hospital C，but exceeding Hospital B by 17% in treating and 13% in another【通過項目之間的對比來實(shí)現(xiàn)句式精簡化，同時實(shí)現(xiàn)句式多樣性】.

  Intems of waiting time and hospitalLstaff.【分段依據(jù)∶將表格中差異較大的數(shù)據(jù)歸在一段描述】，however【語法現(xiàn)象∶插入語】，the gap in patient satisfaction was particularly large among these three hospitals，among which【通過拋出定語從句，可以引出數(shù)值最大或最小的項目】Hospital C accounted for the largest proportions(81% and 92%)，neary twice as much as 【通過比較結(jié)構(gòu)簡化寫作內(nèi)容】those of Hospital B(38% and 53%).While 【通過讓步狀語從句來凸顯數(shù)值間的差異】】the staff in Hospital A was wel-performed 【對題目的改述】and received praises from 74%of the patients， its waiting time seemed intolerable 【對題目的改述】for almost half of the patients sunveyed.

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